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Good practice in essay and commentary writing

good practice: commentary

This document shows some good examples of analysis, introductions, conclusions and so forth in the commentary writing exercise. The samples are taken from the passage set on Candide:

Candide annotated commentary extracts (PDF Document) 

good practice: essay

Sample assignment 1 essay (PDF Document)

Sample assignment 3 essay with annotations (PDF Document)

Detailed feedback notes on assignment 3. These run through each of the questions set. (PDF Document)